Things to improve:
- Need to add more music underneath the opening sequence to build up the ending music
- Establishing shots/introduction to psychiatrist as this scene is only one shot and is 1 minute long, so we need to keep the audience interested.
- More questions from psychiatrist
- Ending is trailer-like
Positive feedback:
- Good camera shots and cuts (camera remains focused on the victim during the psychiatrist scene)
- Good acting (psychiatrist scene)
- Good sound, works well with the cuts (ending)
- Ending is trailer-like (makes you want to keep watching)
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