1. Variety of relevant blog posts.
They said that there was a good variety of posts, all relevant blog posts and easy to understand. However, they were also too brief, need more personal opinions. There were also no posts on thriller analysis.
2. Appropriate visual aids.
There was a good use of photos with the thriller theme. But, we could improve on how many visual aids we used. Also, more captions for our photos and more videos too.
3. Appropriate use of technical vocabulary
Good understanding of thriller as a genre, however a lack of technical language. Some technical vocab but could use more e.g. Juxtaposition
4. Quality of posts.
Detailed and clear in areas. Posts too brief, longer paragraphs with more detailed needed. Justify reasons for using things such as pictures/missing a few posts. Detailed analysis of films
5. Development of film
A little vague on posts explaining why they have used particular image. Ideas need to be clearer and more detailed.
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